Christopher Garcia
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A/N: The conversation at the end would've happened later on anyway, but I decided to hasten it a bit since the situation seemed to rile people up a bit. Hope you enjoy! ---------- Neleh considered her options for a while and decided to defer the decision about Kanako’s punishment for now. Before revealing her own decision, she wanted to gauge the opinions of the others. “As I wasn’t really here when the attack happened, I’d like to hear recommendations from all of you.” She looked first…-
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A/N: Yes the dreaded 18+ content is back! It's once againin spoilers and doesn't contain any plot elements for those that want to skip it. I'll have you know, the chapter is normal length even without the 18+ bit, that's simply a bonus. I hope you enjoy, a lot of things going on in this chapter. ---------- Shiori had no idea what was going on, but she was glad it had happened. Both the pressure emitted by Neleh’s oppressive presence and the magical outbursts had suddenly stopped. The shield had been…
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A/N: A wee bit shorter chapter, but a lot of things going on. Do mention if you want a continuation for the end part I could've added it into this chapter, but then it would've come out tomorrow instead. ---------- Because they were in a hurry, Neleh and Shiori left the other sisters behind to finish their goodbyes and went deeper into the mansion. There Neleh had prepared her own place to deal with the bond being severed. Because they were in a bit of a hurry, all the preparations had been done…
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A/N: Things starting to move again after the time skip. I expect at least a part of this chapter went in a different direction than most people thought. I wanted to try something a little different. A certain character getting a little more character and priority. ----------- It still surprised Shiori how far Nan Yanoi had come in the last two years. The city was now larger than Rhi’a’non, being built on both sides of the river. The city also had a very metropolitan population, with all the major…
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A/N: A chapter heavy with information and progress. I could've added in more detail, and dragged the process along, but I think most people would favor a move towards more interesting parts of the story. ---------- Unsurprisingly, moving a huge number of people takes a lot of time. The preparations started both among the elves and among the faeries immediately, and the first groups of faeries went through the arch Neleh erected almost immediately. The queen of the faeries was among the first to go…
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A/N: One more chapter before the job change. Can't say for sure when the next one will come. Soon hopefully. ---------- While Neleh had been meeting with the Grand Inquisitor Yunalesca, Shiori and Asheara had ran various errands around the city. Mainly they made a few trade deals for resources the duchy of Jao’e’Tinukai wasn’t producing. Of course they also did a little shopping for themselves. They met back up with Neleh for a meal in a popular restaurant. The owner of the restaurant had eagerly…
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A/N: So I'm changing jobs next week. I have no idea what effect if any this will have on my writing. The hours should be about the same, but my writing has never really been constrained by time, instead of being limited by my ability to imagine the scenes ready before sitting to write. The stress and excitement of a new job might tire me out and make it harder to write for the next few weeks, but it might not do anything. It might even inspire me to spend more time imagining the scenes if I get bored. Hard…
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A/N: Or part 2 of chapter 61 if you prefer that. This one is a bit shorter at only 3,1k words, but you got it much faster. ---------- This is where Neleh’s hunch started taking form. Fire seemed somehow too obvious as a choice for her. She also didn’t necessarily have the personality traits most often associated with the element, even if her affinity for it was otherwise great. Thinking that far, she gave the golden warrior a small glance and walked through the door marked with the symbol of fire.…
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A/N: All dem spirits! This is the first part of a two parter. The second part will come tomorrow most likely, since I already have it mapped in my mind. I could've put it all in one long chapter, but then it wouldn't have been finished today as it would've been almost double length. I also wanted to give you something to speculate and guess about. Also some slight suspense. Not quite a cliffhanger, but this house ain't built far from the edge either! ---------- Neleh and Estelar were at the Nan Yanoi…
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A/N: Some economy and plotting. Also a lot of setting the stage for future. ---------- The next four months for Neleh were mostly spent with reforming the duchy and its policies. There wasn’t much in the way of great change visible yet, but the seeds had been planted and the duchy would see enormous economic growth for the next decade. Many of the plans and reforms would only bear fruit when they got out of the growth phase they were currently in. For example, the changes to almost all of the…
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