Christopher Garcia

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  • Chapter 83 — The New Journey of an Old Soul Cover
    by Christopher Garcia A/N: It might be a wee bit confusing to see Khali being called two names, but it would not be in charater for Neleh to chance how she calls her in when not in company of others. Shiori has the same problem. Well, it's not too hard I hope. ---------- As the celestial island was not stationary and flew through the skies instead, Neleh could not put a doorway on the island itself. The celestials already knew about the gateways, so in that sense the doorways wouldn’t be such a surprise, but the…
  • Chapter 82 — The New Journey of an Old Soul Cover
    by Christopher Garcia A/N: The theater play kinda sucked, but the better half liked it for some reason. The problem with spending much of my time reading stories is that I have little patience for poorly written characters, or certain character types, and the play featured two really bad types as the main characters. The wimp and the cocky-useless guy. Just wanted to vent that out. Hope you enjoy the chapter. ---------- The man Shiori was holding down let out a small mirthless laugh. “Give it up girlie. There’s no way…
  • Chapter 81 — The New Journey of an Old Soul Cover
    by Christopher Garcia A/N: Well, I wanted to say that the things hindering my writing are going away for a time, but it seems that's quite not the case. Have to put in some overtime the next two days, and have to take the better half to a threater play on wednesday. Not much writing happening then. Sorry about that. On a completely unrelated note, I want to ask for some opinions from those that have bothered to read my story this far. I'm getting ideas for the next story, that I'm planning to write after this one finishes.…
  • Chapter 80 — The New Journey of an Old Soul Cover
    by Christopher Garcia A/N: The new chapter a day late from the usual schedule. On the plus side, the various programs taking up my time should be lessening now, so we should be getting back to the normal pace. That said, the next few chapters will be fairly complex to write, as I'm trying to think of ways around a certain innevitabilitity I wrote myself into. Also a slight warning for foul language: Khali is less adverse against cursing than other characters so far. Hope you enjoy! ---------- The beastmen we of course…
  • Chapter 79 — The New Journey of an Old Soul Cover
    by Christopher Garcia A/N: Delayed by blizzcon. Enough said. ---------- Since Shiori knew that Neleh had not been especially enthusiastic about visiting the naga, she decided to meet her in the Nexus when Neleh was returning. She noticed Neleh coming out of the mansion, and was about to greet her, when Neleh turned and noticed her coming. Shiori sensed something different, and there was a weird feeling of incongruity around the woman. In her mind, Shiori shifted from calling her Neleh and thought of her as ‘the woman’…
  • Chapter 78 — The New Journey of an Old Soul Cover
    by Christopher Garcia A/N: Light on the pr again. Too tired. Point out any mistakes, please. ----------- After Neleh had managed to walk Nimue through her theological crisis, they returned back to the throne room. Despite Neleh not having any real intentions for forming a separate kingdom, it was fairly obvious that her position as a duchess was vastly different when compared to the other dukes. Even though her position as the Chosen already made her special, that was in the religious context and she needed her position…
  • Chapter 77 — The New Journey of an Old Soul Cover
    by Christopher Garcia A/N: Lot of talking in this one, and a POV from Nimue that some people wanted. I'm not sure on the time table of the next chapters. It's a bit harder to imagine scenes with politics involved. Sometimes things just fall into place and they come out quickly and sometimes they take more effort. We'll see. ---------- Nimue had cut through the commotion by ordering the duke of Caledor to be captured and interrogated. Afterwards she had invited both Neleh and the grand magus of Saphery to her office for a…
  • Chapter 76 — The New Journey of an Old Soul Cover
    by Christopher Garcia A/N: I'm too ill and tired to do a proper pr, so you'll have to make due. It shouldn't be too bad as I was writing slowly, but there will be errors. A/N redux: The song I had in mind for the chapter in case some people are interested. The last one went over well, so...: https://youtu.be/b96rrbo-_Ik?t=2m16s ---------- Two weeks after the battle with Caledorian forces the Order had finished taking over the county that had allowed the enemy entry into Jao’e’Tinukai. This process had been helped…
  • Chapter 75 — The New Journey of an Old Soul Cover
    by Christopher Garcia A/N: Got stuck readin Claymore. I regret nothing. ---------- Shiori was calmly watching several buildings burn in the city of Caledor, the capitol of the duchy with the same name. All of the buildings currently burning were important buildings connected to the government of the duchy or buildings connected to the military. All of the burning buildings were also spread around the city at a considerable distance from the ducal palace. She could see guards swarming around the city looking for the cause…
  • Chapter 74 — The New Journey of an Old Soul Cover
    by Christopher Garcia A/N: Warning: a lot of innocent animals and elves were hurt during the shooting of this movie. ---------- It was half as expected, half a surprise to Neleh when the Caledorians actually managed to come up with even a feigned casus belli for their actions. On one hand it was very rare for there to be no reason for actions such as this, but on the other hand the Caledorians had already made it clear to everyone that their reason was just for show, so Neleh didn’t think they’d even bother. At court,…
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